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The highest point of the city

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Беатрииииич, тебе х)) попыталась сделать так, чтобы были пейзаж-непейзаж, яойка и два кавая *____* потом ещё Лайта с Элом нарисуюXD

Дыа, перспективы нет, крыша падает, текстуры блю-э, анатомия удручает (оособенно руки т__Т), источник света не определён))
А, ещё два моста, и будет НижнийXD
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

This is very good! The clothes are very realistic and the way the lights shine from the nearby city gives it a very nice effect. The hair is also shaded in very well and the shadows are placed perfectly.
However, I do think Mello's arm is a bit too short. I think it should bend a little over halfway.
I also think that the sky should be a bit lighter, or the darkening should be more gradual.
Matt's head should also be tilted a bit, but I've never kissed anyone, so what do I know?

All in all, this is a great piece. Their feelings for each other are obvious. Great job!