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Scorpion Flower

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Entry for summer contest in :iconcielphantomhivefc:
Moonspell - Scorpion Flower is the song chosen for this drawing. It is quite gloomy and sinister and it reminded me about some dangerous attraction..

One more important thing - my friend has already said it is shit. Not actually a shit - but "huinya" (the stress is on the last syllable) and it means almost the same thing as "shit" on russian. My mood is totally not good now because of many personal problems, so if you think too this pic is bad - just don't tell me, I already know it.
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Анатомия - херня, Сиэль - не похож, перспектива - отсутствует, фон - и тот без текстуры не фон. Так что если кому-нибудь тоже кажется, что это "хуйнякакаято" - правильно кажется, но в информировании меня об этом надобности нет, ибо уже сообщили. А мой кот сейчас смотрит на меня как маньяк и икает, это няшно.
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Ciel Phantomhive ("Kuroshitsuji")
For making background texture I used photo made by me.
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I don't think your friend meant it like that otherwise he/she should not be called friend.
Every piece of art that was created with effort to it, can never be "shit".

So lets see what we have...

I really like the atmosphere of this piece.
The lighting and environment are creating a cold, sinister mood.
You made a good use of the Texture and the sparkles of light are a good idea.
I also like how his hair is very detailed.

What i don't like so much is the anatomy on his body.
His neck and upper body are wide but his lower body seems more like one of a child.
It totaly lags of even the tiniest contour of muscle and is really slender, especially in comparison to the rest of his body.

The Pillar on which the flower floats lags texture.
Compared to the rest of the picture it is quite low on detail, even for a simple stone pillar.
Remember that every part of a picture counts in the overall impression of the viewer!
Also the Flower is the source of light but the top of the pillar is as dark as the rest of it, which is a bit weird.


There are some things to work on but i am sure you will keep on improving as you are a talented artist!